Wednesday 17 August 2011


Snow
By Elsie (Room 10)

On Monday 16 August it was the snowiest day, so snowy even school was cancelled.
I got cold and wet, so I didn’t like the snow that much.

The snow is as soft as whipped cream,
When the snow falls it is just like my dream.

The snow falls as raindrops fall from the sky,
Just imagine a snowflake pie.

All of the snowflakes look like marshmellows in the sky,
It might be like eating a soft cream pie.

I said to my friends “hi” then “bye”
I’m off to make my snowman called Si.

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